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Sunday, February 27, 2011

Show, Don't Tell

Dear K.,

Thank you for your submission entitled "Your Touch" to the Journal of Universal Rejection.

I'm afraid your poem was not very good, so we are rejecting it. Try to get some more details in the poem—to "show, don't tell." That will improve it. Also, maybe don't use pink.

Best regards,
Caleb

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